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Should I have focused more on the flowers? Done more post processing?




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Hopefully I'm getting my 'groove' back.

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:iconmandaart73:
Beautiful capture of the flora. I love the soft contrasting against the glass like lake. I like the way the flowers are focused in on and everything else is just a blur. It really brings you to focus on the flowers. It is interesting the way it is not dead centered, the way the lake is acting as a horizon point like a sky would against land. Overall very beautiful picture. Purple always has a great contrast against green making it pop nicely with out over powering the image. As I said before just a beautiful picture. So, well done!
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:icondarkdothacker:
i like how it is balanced with the flowers at a angle like that. you could have gotten the rest of the top of the stem, but kept the space to the right like you have it. feels like the pic is cut off.
Contrast can be a little better. nothing really pops out of the picture making it very smooth.
i don't like the lake in so much view, it is kinda like a eye sore with the reflections being all blurred. if the water was blue-er and there was blue down with the flowers it would fit allot better in the pic.
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:iconedwardbella4ever:
Beautiful shot! Love purple!

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very pretty flowers :)

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neat! the lighting is very well done :D
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very beautiful:D

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I really like the lighting and the position of this shot. The sparkles in the background are cool. :P

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Love the background too!

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I love it :D the water in the back makes it even cooler n__n

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Flowers~! you should macro them a bit more ^^

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Love the lighting..though it would have been nice also to make it a little more macro.. :aww:

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May 29, 2009, 5:47:00 PM

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