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How It Always Ends

by =SarahxJane

She

loved
him;

he
b r o k e
her.

How It Always Endsby =SarahxJane

Literature / Prose / Fiction / General Fiction / Short Stories

For #SixWordStories' Open Theme Contest

Thought of this right after I saw the contest news article.

_{Nothing too profound.}

_{_{The flow of the text is supposed to show the decline of the relationship.}}

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~dragonsangel Jan 15, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

still, clever

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Gloria Deo!

~dragonsangel Jan 15, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

in my case it was always the opposite

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Gloria Deo!

~littlemisslee Dec 17, 2010 Student General Artist

simple, perfect.
i love it; can relate to it.
you did a fine job. (:

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~mint-bunny Dec 15, 2010

Bravo! Bravo!
It sumarized a cliche idea in a fabulously short way!

gone.

=Emrose88 Dec 14, 2010 Hobbyist Writer

Aww I actually faved from the thumbnail, then I went to full view it and it had a different structure. It's beautiful!

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^3wyl Dec 14, 2010 Hobbyist Photographer

I like the different formatting you've used and how that seems to emphasise each individual word as if you were trying to portray each shatter of the heart or each bit he broke off her, if that makes sense.

The descending formation makes me believe a person is falling to the floor...

Overall, I think it's quite a profound piece. Great portrayal, visual wise.

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*dragon-fly-to-me Dec 13, 2010 Hobbyist Writer

Been there....
Fact are facts, eh?

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"In the sweetness of friendship let there be laughter, and sharing of pleasures." ~Khalil Gibran

~KittyChick Dec 9, 2010

I think everyone can feel this one...

What If    There have been far too many times where I have asked myself

  w h a t i f

What if I had been stronger.
What if I wasn't so selfish.What if I would have graduated.
What if I hadn't run away.
What if I was more independant.What if I had been more careful.What if he would have loved me back.

What if I would have said goodbye.What if I would have called the police.What if she wouldn't have died.What if I swallowed one more pill.What if I lied.

  what if
what if
what if
what if
what if
what if

But I think the scariest thing to ask myself is,

  What if I simply chose to live?What If by =SarahxJane

How It Always Ends She
loved
him;

he
b r o k e
her.
How It Always Ends by =SarahxJane

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